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I wonder if Heaven has some sort of Heaven
And if Heaven's Hell is us down here
Wonder if our Earth is considered Heaven
To those living way down there

Wonder if the Underworld has lower levels
Or if Heaven has social ranks
Wonder if Heaven has some sort of Jesus
Other than the one sitting at God's right side

I wonder if Hell has various religions
Or if Satan maintains Dictatorship
Wonder if when we die we go to Heaven
Perhaps we're judged in the Underworld instead

I often ask myself these questions
There is no counterproof, so I am not wrong
Wonder if Heaven is a democracy
Or if it's just another hoax like Satan said

I wonder if people can sin in Heaven
Or if they can be forgiven while in Hell
Wonder why God is so perfect
If he cannot hold democratic elections

Wonder whether there is a point to living
Considering that after death you get "eternal life"
Wonder why adults bother with kids
They should know we won't be cute after a while

I wonder when I will know
Or at least when I'll find out
Wonder why people worship other spirits
When they could be doing something productive with their time

I often ask myself these questions
There is no counterproof, so I am not wrong
Wonder if the blind can see in Heaven
Or if the visual turn blind in Hell

Wonder why humans are so stubborn
They can speak but they do not listen
Wonder why it is that I am wondering
And not living my life as it should be

Wonder when...
Wonder why...
Wonder how...
Wonder who...
Wonder where...

Wonder if...
©2003-2009 ~fia2
:iconfia2:

Author's Comments

I can actually say a new 'bad word' and not scare myself silly. Heck, they say it in the Bible, so you know... I guess it's okay. A super-saint friend of mine says it's okay.
So it's okay.

Anyway, I was really only writing for the sake of inspiration, not really to get any rhythm or syllabic pattern. I actually have a tune to go with it - probably the only reason the wording and sequencing on some of it make sense to me.

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:icondoubleentendre:
i like your imaginative thoughts expressed in the poem. i especially like how you provided a lot of contrast and paradox, such as "they can speak but they do not listen" and "wonder why it is that i am wondering", just stuff like that. good work
:icontheamos:
GAAAAHHHH!!!!

*screams, runs aound, jumps up and down, takes out half of the poems he's got and stomps them into the ground*

THIS IS SO KEEEEEWL I CANT BELIEVE YOU WROTE THIS!! IT MAKES ME LOOK SO LAAAAME!!

*falls down and twitches spasmodically*

It's so unfair... that was so GOOD.... *fave+*

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Introvertive yet explosive... quaint, indeed.

-(I suck.)
:iconkaraii:
*stares*
*gapes*
*drools*
*dies*
*is given a pheonix-down*
WOOOOOWW!! That is SOO cool!! Darn it sis! You're not supposed to be as cuss-mouthed as me! *pouts* Lol, jk. Hell isn't a bad word (neither is damn or any of those words, but hey, people will get mad, so I keep my trap shut), so don't worry.
This puts a lot of people at shame...were do you teens get so much INSPARATION?! *sighs*
Oh well, I must depart. Great work btw! Rock on. =D
*is hearing one-winged-angel w/ latin words ^_^*

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"Let today not be the day that becomes a butterfly." -TDTBAB
:iconfia2:
blush~~~~~~! O:

*sizzle*

XD I really don't think I'm all that good... gaaah...! You too niceee! :>

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When the world needs a break, I come in with a mallet and chopsticks. :#1:
~Girl from down under the USofA
:iconfetish-kitten:
that is one of the best poems ive seen on this site so far. superb work...and remember, there is no evil but what we make.

xoxo
fetish-kitten
:iconfetish-kitten:
that is one of the best poems ive seen on this site so far. superb work...and remember, there is no evil but what we make.

xoxo
fetish-kitten

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